I remember those months long ago,
When the tummy had begun to show;
And the little kicks would appear,
"Who's there? " they made me whisper!
Now he has a lovely name
One look and he lights my face!
But every morning he leaves me here,
To wait for a knock and say "who's there?"
And I know the day will come
To reach him I have to pick up the phone
And as it jingles on his busy day
My heart will turn warm as I hear him say,
"Who's there?" it will make my day!
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Weekend Wordsmith - Who's there?
(c) Preethi @ Creative Outbursts, September 2008
12 comments:
first thought - so very cute and gentle and innocent
then the last para.. kind of is ironic too..but it is the way of life innit?!
But I tell u I really like the way you used the prompt!
Good work and Keep Writing!
hey this was lovely
Lovely post ! Loved it
Its me here :D Who's there?
Hey, That was AWESOME!
He will be very proud of his mom when he gets to read this and the rest of your blog :)
Anticipatory pangs of a distant future which will turn into reality
TC
CU
:) very sweet indeed!
awww...now that's how its always going to be...
An entire lifetime in those few lines, and just because someone says who's there!!
So beautiful...loved it
I loved this one !! So true
Oh yea.. this is so true.
This is probly the way our parents would be thinking of us - right
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